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Re: Aradel's Daughter Preface
Preface - Dreamed The sky was dark, and the mists blanketed the narrow valley, rendering the world invisible until nothing but a white field remained. Cela pulled the cowl of ...
Dec 20, 2009 -
Re: Aradel's Daughter Chapter VII
All right!!! Thank you, both of you! I'll be looking through this once I get to editing these chapters!!!
Dec 20, 2009 -
Re: Aradel's Daughter Chapter VI
Okay, just one thing, ha ha, I still have to edit all of this!!! So that will all be in consideration once I get their. I'll put up the next ...
Dec 17, 2009 -
Re: Aradel's Daughter Chapter IV
Well, the rest will come up later, try tomorrow night, but I have to say.... Cela has no fear of dying, I must say now. You will see this in ...
Dec 12, 2009 -
Re: Aradel's Daughter Chapter I
Hopefully you will all think the story get's better. I wrote the beginning around a year before the rest, but didn't have time to fix it before my hurried eight ...
Dec 7, 2009 -
Re: Aradel's Daughter Preface
Okay, there is one reason why there is no action in this. I will tell you a secret... It's a dream. That is the reason I have it very descriptive. ...
Dec 7, 2009 -
Re: Star-Flight (Chapter I)
thanks, I know it's short, but I have yet to figure out loooooong chapters, so you'll have to deal for the time being. A diffrent book I started is longer ...
May 12, 2009 -
Re: Star-Flight (Prologue)
O.o I get it!!! will do!
May 12, 2009 -
Re: Star-Flight (Prologue)
Let's get on with it, It's done, and edited to my best ability. Thanks for all the great reviews, and here you go... Chapter I Meetings “Steon? Stee--eon?!” A voice ...
May 5, 2009 -
Re: Star-Flight (Prologue)
Thank you for the Crit. My sense of Mystery was intentional, as I needed to keep it going, and make the prologue longer XD. Everything clears up after the first ...
May 3, 2009
