Elentari

Okay, I like it a lot!!! xD, so you're a vampire story person too huh? That could explain why you were attracted to my work, and I like yours too!!!! ...

okay, I like the concept, and with some editing, you could get really far. The only thing I really have to say is that like Elinor said, it was a ...

Wow. This is really good. I just saw "LEO" in the title, and thought "Hey, I'm a Leo, and this has a cool title." You're definitely a good writer, and ...

I absolutely love your sense of mystery, it's so good, and thrilling. You created great passages, and pieces in your work. Now, I can't correct you grammar, or spelling (Sorry, ...