Elelel

Why did you delete it? I came back, when it wasn't so late to edit it, and it's gone!

I say keep the third stranza! Seriously! (unless you've alreadly deleted it and it's not the thrid stranza anymore... I'll stop, I'm confusing myself) It's not a bad thing about ...

One of my parents have/are reading the Da Vinci Code (probably mum, dad think fictional books are boring... honestly!), I've seen it hovering around the place. I need to nah ...

I've almost read every one of her books (I had to post-pone Circle opens 3 due to the book club and can't find book 4 in pathetic small town bookshop... ...

I've read all her books... well, I havn't read 'the circle opens' quartette, but everything else! And loved it all.

Finally! I can read it! And I love it! The character work is exellent, and you don't have too much description. I spotted typos too, but I won't toture you ...

well... it's a work in prgress. I'll try put more of those lines in. It was a metaphor, I was talking about this guy I really really really really really ...

I know EXACTLY what that poem is about ... and love it! (as usual :D)

I like it too! THe pace is good, and I just like it how it talks about being evil. Everyone has that dream sometime...

Same question, extra emphases on the why.

You KNOW how much I absolutely love it Mesh, do I need to say it again? Whole thing is perfect, and it's not just me that thinks it by the ...

Oh thanks El, But like I've said its a PART of my book, but Im planning to prepare the entire chapter and sent it here. I thought you would have ...

... I was thinking along those lines too, but I tried to phrase it a bit nicer (if there is such a word).

I love this! Particually the repeated The lights in the city always go out first in a room at the end of a hallway bit. The dashes are a good ...

I'm afraid I'm going to have to ech bubble, Beautiful! Days and nights and eons ago ^Absolute favourite line!