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*is confused* Why did you delete it if you've got 4/4 interesting votes and you want it revised ... I would have revised it, but it's gone now so I ...

Eh. Don't know about Snape under Dumbledores orders. Good theory though. But ... I don't know. I'd rather he killed not under orders if it were up to me. I'd ...

I figured Regulus Black straight away too. *mutters to self* Just take away the victory why don't you *grins* ignore me. I running low on caffine right now. *shrugs* the ...

Grammar made your story horrible, but your story was funny. Oh. *is a little put out* I'd hoped my grammer was better than last time I posted (he he. I ...

More will come .. when I'm allowed back on the internet (I'm supposed to be doing homwork now *whistles innocently*) Sorry about the typos, I had to type it out ...

I didn't think it would be your sort of thing, Rei. Well, the story I wrote for school kind of ends up with her seeing that teachers are people too ...

YAY! Rock on, Elore! Well... if you want to read the beginning, I could just PM it to you... That'd be good! I'd like to read it all. (and it's ...

It was like a Dragon mouth it really was. It was like a dragon's mouth, it really was. But one thing struck Edward as odd why was there cinder marks ...

I think you said all I was going to point out, so im not going to say it all again, but its a good start honestly, a few typos, could ...

I didn't do any of those examples or find any of those mistakes for her. *is proud* (Sorrowind was named because of the hurricanes that occur annually). *says primly* We're ...

*swears* I had a HUGE critique done, as an edit to the last post, and it went and logged me out because it took so long, and didn't post it. ...

OK, well, I'm back already because I finished all my homework and got bored. Wyes knew what he was looking at, he was seeing himself a week after his parents ...

Both I'd say, it's her favourite place after all. But yeah, deffinately the looks because cannons aren't things seen everyday by most people ... my town has an old WW ...

She's right too, try not to take it too seriously. Write for fun, you improve with practice, practice and much more practice. :D

Let me just say one thing, I know about the dialogue ok! I know you guys are just helping but if you read that someone has already said that to ...