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Re: The Immigrants
Maybe use some connectives too!
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Re: The Immigrants
Hi Wunderbar! So, by reading the title, I thought it was just going to be a story about, well, just immigrants. But you made the story quite exiting, and easy ...
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Re: The Immigrants
Sorry, something went wrong with my laptop, so there is a blank message.
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Re: No Name (For now)
your welcome LoyalDay.
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Re: Red and Blue
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Dec 12, 2016
Hi Casanova, I found this in the Green Room, so I though that I would review it, This poem is great. You have used great language and you have made ... -
Re: No Name (For now)
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Re: The Bomb
thanks, it is meant to be a mystery series. Responding to some of you comments, the ....... is meant to be for suspense but I will make that shorter, the ...
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Re: The Bomb
Thanks for the comment, but i have just started. i will take on what you have said though.
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Re: Letter to the fake high school friends I used to know.
poem was a little repetitive show more points of view and we all go through this anyway in life bye bye.
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Re: The Bomb
I hope you like the beginning chapter of this mystery series.
Dec 10, 2016