- Re: The Immigrants Dec 14, 2016
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Re: Europa's Third Law
Hi DamienCyfer, So, I think this is a very good story, particularly because I don't really find space that interesting or exiting. You have used some great descriptive words such ...
Dec 13, 2016 -
Re: The Darker Reindeer
Hi NightKaizer, i think your title is very intriguing. As soon as I read it, I was lured in, and immediately wanted to read more. I also like how you ...
Dec 12, 2016 -
Re: My anxiety
Hi Lau2001, This is a really dramatic and sad story, especially as it says before you click into it that it happened to you. I wouldn't really look at this ...
Dec 12, 2016 -
Re: Red and Blue
Hi Casanova, I found this in the Green Room, so I though that I would review it, This poem is great. You have used great language and you have made ...
Dec 12, 2016 -
Re: Ghostly Alley; Chapter one
Hi writerkitty, This chapter is absolutely amazing! It tells us a whole load of information about what the main character is like, and why she is in the mess that ...
Dec 12, 2016 -
Re: No Name (For now)
Hi LoyalDay, I think the start of this story is really good. It tells a lot about what had happened in just a paragraph. Maybe later, if you want to ...
Dec 10, 2016