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ElectricSkies

  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Literature Re: The Demon Inside: Connor's Story

    Thank you so much for your feedback! I understand that the story feels a bit rushed--I wrote it in six hours and as I never thought I would ever be ...

    Fri Dec 06, 2013 7:57 am
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I was lost...

    I am so glad everything worked out! I'm really happy that you have a positive outlook about it!

    Wed Dec 04, 2013 10:25 pm
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Literature Re: The Demon Inside: Connor's Story

    Thanks for the feedback!

    Wed Dec 04, 2013 8:14 pm
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Literature Re: The Demon Inside: Connor's Story

    Thank you so much for your feedback! I will definitely keep your tips in mind for future writings!

    Wed Dec 04, 2013 8:14 pm
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Teen Fiction Re: Angel Wings

    I really like your poem! I did get a sense of imagery while I read it and that is always a good sign. I did appreciate how you made the ...

    Tue Nov 26, 2013 7:19 pm
  • Poetry » General, General Re: On This Day

    I like this a lot! I love the simplicity yet strength that you conveyed. Keep up the good work!

    Tue Nov 26, 2013 7:14 am


Anger is an acid that can do more harm to the vessel in which it is stored than to anything on which it is poured.
— Mark Twain