Eimear

I agree, I enjoyed the rhythm of this piece, especially the last line, but to me I just wasn't gripped enough to be left wanting more. Perhaps develop a couple ...

Hey, I quite enjoyed the descriptive language in this, especially this line at the begining: It was the same wind that awoke the listless strands of hair and swirled them ...

Hey,wow this is really refreshing because you wrote it from the heart, and it vibrates throughout the entire poem, giving me as a reader a deep insight into your thoughts ...

Wow, this is hard hitting stuff....and a complete gem which I found by accident when exploring the website. I really, actually, loved reading this. I left me wanting more. Of ...

Heyhey, I called in just to have a quick little read....but I got hooked and felt obliged to offer a (albeit seriously lame) title for your poem. I don't have ...

It causes me to go hmmm....*Ponders* You're writing style causes me to think already that you've found your own voice, and the prolouge reads very nicely indeed. So I want ...

Heyhey, Wolvesofthenight! This is quite a nice, funny poem. It seems like you wrote it for that intention alone, so that's kind of cool. Just a few points to make, ...

This is truly, poetry at its best. The way your words are shaped and the entire thing echo a a single, poetic voice against a silence. Its amazing the way ...

Heyhey, this (If I have indeed interpretated it correctly) is a really interesting insight into Ambition. I enjoyed the imagery and descriptive language, especially this line The tears are left ...

Hey, this is a nice poem. It's very descriptive and intensely heartfelt, so I believed you as a writer were in this type of situation. So good one. Meh, the ...

Hey, I was really drawn into this. The title attracted me first off, and then I felt engaged as the poem developed, kind of like someone's thoughts, meandering, conclusive I ...

Wow, there's a hell of a lotta feeling in this poem. I guess that's what made me like it, since it's obvious that you've put your heart into your writing. ...

Hey, I just have to say.....Wow. Although I havent read the entire thing, I dropped in to critque the grammer etc, but was well and truly distracted by the delicious ...

Oh. My. Days. This is so magical!!! I know I thought the last bit wasn't 'spell- binding'- but this bit certainly is! I absoultely loved the way the story progressed, ...

Hey, I don't normally read scripts, but I've recently gotten into reading plays since we have to at school, and I have to say I throughly enjoyed this piece here. ...