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Thanks for those corrections. This was just a practice, rather than a story, that's why the characters are a bit rubbish, to be honest. I was just trying to get ...

I'm glad I inspired you! Your rewrite looks great, the descriptions are vivid and it reads really smoothly! I see you already found my story, so I don't need to ...

I'll get right on that, thanks Sarah

*goes off to read reviews on Rose Red* I assure you, it's nothing like Rose red...

I think I'll add in a third person perspective of Mike or Robert's entrance to the manor....cause yeah, it is quite a sudden start, at least for Hunter. Thanks for ...

I appreciate your comment greatly. The ten years is, indeed, figurative. You're right, it is too short. It's hard for me to go into great detail when I've got an ...

Okay guys, here I need some help; character development is not my strong suite, so I need you to point out ANYTHING you feel is too over the top, strange, ...

I hate to give anything away, but pretty much everything asnyone says or does in this book has significance. Surprisingly, I like many religious things into the book later on, ...

nothing? not even a titter?

An hour later, Yurok slipped into the orc encampment, undetected. He completely ignored the orcs sleeping by the fire, as well as those guarding the command tent. He headed straight ...

hmmm...*thinks hard* L****** was fun, but S****** and I get along really the point where we're finishing each other's jokes lol

rolling on the floor LAUGHING MY....eh...FACE OFF! So true, so true, Bobo.... but hey, we ended up with the greatest history teacher on the planet, did we not?

This is a totally different version, completely from scrath...I pretty much scrapped my 80 page one, and only have it aorund for reference...

enjoy!! *** “-- up! Hunter!” I awoke abruptly as someone shook me by roughly by the shoulders. “I’m awake, get off me,” I groaned groggily. “Wake up dammit!” the voice ...

I would LOVE to read more of this!