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wow, this is a great opening. It had me hooked from the very first line. I think this is a very interesting idea, definitely a first. This piece shows some ...

Wow, this was very well written. I had no idea what direction you were going to take this, you completely through me in for a loop. I was falling in ...

Wow, I really enjoyed this piece. I could really feel all the emotion this character is expressing. " How can you sleep so peacefully when you know I'm not alone? ...

I find this paragraph to be a great hook to a beginning of a book. It leaves me wanting to read more and find out more what it's like in ...

Wow, I really enjoyed this poem. I could just feel all the emotion in this piece. I really liked the line: " It was the sound of flesh hitting flesh ...

I really enjoyed reading this poem, it left me with a happy feeling. It was like a window into your life and the imagery as great as well. One of ...

Hey, nice work. I thought this poem was well written and it had a warm vibe to it. The imagery was good as well! I also thought the use of ...