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The opening lines hit like a bullet to the bone, the demand is paradoxical, an instruction defying logic yet embodying emotional reality. "Shoot my leg, but don’t I dare bleed"—a ...

This was such a creepy poem but in a heartfelt way. Like it was one big oxymoron. It feels like you are in love, but it's a kind of love ...

I haven't really figured out how to post stuff so everyone can see it yet, but imma work on that so hopefully it will be up soon. Thank you so ...

Thank you so much. This was a bitttttt long (lol). This really helped, having someone break it down in so much detail. I will keep this in the back of ...

Thank you so much I really appreciate this. I will try to post chapter 4 this week but if I can't it will definitely be next week. Go check chapter ...

Yes it was my pleasure to read.

Don't sell yourself short, I read your stuff and I actually like the plot/setting much better. I only write fast because anything vaguely related to a "social life" wouldn't touch ...

This poem, sometimes, i don't feel blessed to exist, powerfully articulates the emotional dissonance and inner conflict that arises from experiencing numbness, isolation, and the exhaustion of living

This poem, sometimes, i don't feel blessed to exist, powerfully articulates the emotional dissonance and inner conflict that arises from experiencing numbness, isolation, and the exhaustion of living

This really motivated me to keep writing this. Thank you so much this means the world. Chapter 2 is out now, if you want to go check that out. I ...

This was a really good poem. Through the medium of the surrounding nature you conveyed the message of the love. It was a soft passion, and also a beautiful one. ...