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im afraid...i didnt get any of it. O_O I felt like something was about to burst but in the end, it pushed me farther and i failed to READ what ...

You're not happy with it? 0.o Can i like kill you right now? *Gun clicks* Applause. And oh i won't kill you, your story is too excellent I might flood ...

Reminded me of the Rich Man and Lazarus. Hm, interesting. They've all pointed out the parts where you need improvement but nonetheless i don't think a tidbit of flattery would ...

The young man sat there and stared at the pristine blue sky, clutching his gas mask. Such short sentence with simple descriptions yet tells so much and reaches out amazingly. ...

Regarding the grammars and shiz, i have no doubts. However.... Not a bit but all out TELLY. I'm afraid i liked the start although i was attacked yet again by ...

I simply am moved by it. I'm not usually the one who gets moved a lot but this.....however almost made me want to hate you for being soooo good writing ...

I mega hate that this made me laugh so bad. You once again have not disappointed me. Grawr. Review, my ass. =))) This has been and always will be: Jace ...

A large, rotund woman, fat rolling over her khakis, gets the bread dough, which is the color of her skin and beats it. This intro presupposes the genuinity of the ...

At first, I thought it will be about that man by the window who'd wallow in self-pity and that anticipated tragedy but i was fairly taken aback on how seriously ...

Your Father - Searching: term not found. This one is probably the best line in your poem. I genuinely couldn't help but say it over and over! :D and love ...

I knew you once, I knew you twice. All my life I thought you were nice. Good starting lines although you lost me at "I knew you twice" when you've ...

The two suffocating bothered me for a while there but not so much to work on ;) It's as good as it should be. :) Kudos!

Hey you're back with the second one. Quite disappointing that you hung it for a drag read and nothing much in it. I know it would be torture that Arnold ...

Now the trance ends, I look up at the moon and something is missing .... I begin to feel this anticipation, that it's going to burst in the end and ...

Don't listen to the comment before me. [no offense.] It was actually better that it was long because sawing it in half and throwing away the other would make this ...