EPICnumber1

ok :)

Thanks for a wonderful review I will add your ideas in to this piece as soon as I get time :) If I have any questions I will ask you ...

Thank you I will totally edit this :)

I honestly can't be bothered to write this story but I know the plot and what happens and everything but I can't be bothered to write this. I think Its ...

Ok thank you for reading this I will use all of your ideas for this piece :)

:) thank you for your review

Thank you I will add all of your suggestions when I get time to.

I have done my best to edit it please tell me what you think. Critism wanted!

ok I like what you said but this is my first time writing on this website. I will correct the eroors I made and take your imput in to action ...

aw thanks for your review. I will try to sort the errors out but I have never been one for spelling. I add all of your helpfull comments into my ...

I really like this, It's really good see if you can add more verses.