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Re: Inspiration
Nice poem here. It flowed really well all the way until the last line. The poem seemed to have led me to a cliff and instead of seeing a breathtaking ...
Jun 19, 2012 -
Re: Me
Good piece here. I enjoyed reading it. I like how it began with the general feeling of pain. It brought me to a dark place that I'm familiar with, so ...
Jun 19, 2012 -
Re: A Stone for Anita
Review "What happened, 'tween you and her? Where did she go?" I like the accent you're using, but it seems like you lose it at times. The first question shows ...
Mar 15, 2012 -
Re: Waiting in the Dark
Hi, I really like the idea for your story here, capturing a child's fear of the night, but I think you could use a little more detail. I think right ...
Jan 22, 2012
