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Hello there. If i'm being honest this is the first of you work that i have read and i can't wait to go and read the previous chapter. I love ...

Hey there. I love the way you have written the "America Fighting - Prologue." You have created the base for a really interesting story. I can't find any grammar or ...

Hey there. I love the way you have started this chapter. "A man collapsed tiredly in front of his rinky-dink television in his disheveled home on the south side of ...

Hey there. I love what you have written in this chapter. It is good to see that the plot appears to be moving forward. the way you ended the chapter ...

Hello there. In all honesty This is the first of your work that I have read and I love it. The plot you have is very interesting. The way you ...

Hey there. OMG. I love this chapter. you have just the right about of description to put an image into the readers mind. They way you started the Chapter by ...

Hello there. As far as first chapter go you have done fantastic with this one. I love the way you have started the chapter by saying, "Faeries?" The elf boy ...

Hey there. This is the first of your work that i have read and I love it. Your plot line is really interesting. I think you could add some more ...

Hey there. I love what you have written in chapter 8. I can see that that plot is staring to build. One suggestion that i have is that in some ...

Hello there. I haven't read any of your previous work but after reading this i think I'm going to have to. I love the short description you wrote in the ...

Hey there Horselover1001. I love the concept of this story and i think you have the base to an amazing piece of work. After reading this i can confidently say ...

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hey there. I loved reading this chapter. you have done a great job of getting the readers hooked into the story. You have written some truly fantastic settings and characters. ...

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Hello there. This chapter is lovely like all your others and i think that you have a lot of potential. You have quite a few grammar mistake which have already ...

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Hello there. I would like to start of by saying that for a first chapter you have done a phenomenal job. The plot outline is clear, you have also done ...

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Hi there. i'm assuming you're referring back to Quinn not liking churches when you say, 'And it wasn't fault of the architecture' but you should be staring a paragraph with ...