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Hey there, First off i love the art that you have included in this post. This was another really well written chapter, the description you have used when writing the ...

Hey there, Firstly, i love how you started this chapter, "Zoltar didn’t know how long he’d been lying there, but it felt like hours. The light of the fire rocks ...

Hi there. WOW! I love the start of this chapter, the imagery you have just put into my head is amazing. The way you have described her tone of voice, ...

Hey there, It's been a while since i read the prologue but i think i remember enough to say the the continuation between chapters was good. You've done a really ...

Hi there, Good continuation from the last chapter into the current it really shows what happened lead up in my opinion. I liked the way you started this chapter describing ...

Hey there, first off i would like to say how much i loved your opening... describing the setting, it sets up the underlining tone for the whole chapter. Your dialogue ...

Hey there, thank you for the tag in the comments, really appreciate it. I really like the way the story is progressing, especially scarlet's character. I really like how her ...

Hey there, i would like to start by saying that it is really hard for me to become attached to a book series or a writer so well done. There ...

Hi there, You have written another amazing chapter, however there are some things i think you could work on. The first thing i noticed was the chapter continuation, you have ...

Hey there, I like how through this chapter we gain a little more insight into Scarlet's character and it is also good to see more of Jasper. One thing i ...

Hey there again, I love the way you have drawn out the plot, it just leave me as a reader hanging on ever word. There isn't anything i can find ...

Hey there i'm back, First of all i love the continuation from the last chapter to this one is flows really well. So far there is only one grammar mistake ...

Hey there, So if I'm being honest this is the first of your work in this chapter novel series i have read and i love it. The way you start ...

Hello there, I would like to start by saying I'm getting major wings of fire vibes and I love it. The way you have started the chapter is really good ...

Hey there, I love what you have posted. The depth in the characters words, actions, has been really well written. I myself am looking forward to reading more of Dead ...