User avatar

EJL3

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Intangible Part 2-Vindictive Threats and Things Gone Wrong

    Hello Now I read Intangible Part 1 to really get what is happening in this part, and let me just say, that it's a great story you have here. Not ...

    Jan 26, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Fantasy Re: Deleted

    Hello A very well described chapter. You didn't reveal what the story is really about, but I think it's a great way to push your readers to read further. I ...

    Jan 26, 2020
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: My princesses.

    Hello Dramatic and realistic...more like suspense and FanFiction. From the beginning till the end I couldn't pry my eyes off the screen... what an amazing story! At first, I thought ...

    Jan 26, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: Third Time's a Charm [Chapter 2.2]

    Hello For starters, I would like to ask if Damian Wayne was such a cute and fascinating character in the comics? I like the way he's so observant and bold ...

    Jan 25, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: Third Time's a Charm [Chapter 2.1]

    Hello What a great idea putting in some pieces of context before getting into the story, it really helped me grasp the story line. Again the writing was good, I ...

    Jan 25, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: Third Time's a Charm [Chapter 1]

    Hello With all honesty I am not much of a Batman and Robin fan. I never spend more than a few minutes watching the series. But once I started reading ...

    Jan 25, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: Unlucky 13 - Chapter 20

    Hello It's the first time I read a Teen Fiction, Realistic or Unlucky 13 for that matter, but after reading your chapter, I'm excited to read more. I even intend ...

    Jan 24, 2020
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Stepsister

    Hello Woah...I love this remake of Cinderella. I have often wondered about the stepsisters, wondered why they were so bitter to Ella and found their mother's cruelty also intriguing? Naturally ...

    Jan 24, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: The Legendary Five Spirits Prologue

    Hello Honestly, I love how this story starts. It's romantic at first, you can just feel the strong love Jedediah has for his wife and the pride he feels for ...

    Jan 23, 2020
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Teen Fiction Re: Prisoner of Crime

    Hello So first off I want to just say...Wow, didn't see it coming! When I read the title of the book, I imagined the story would speak about some cruel ...

    Jan 21, 2020


In three words I can sum up everything I've learned about life: it goes on.
— Robert Frost