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Re: Another Zombie Novel: Chapter One Part 3
This was a nice read. I have to say it was really enjoyable. It made me feel like I had a deep understanding of your character when your mentioned family ...
Jul 7, 2016 -
Re: You Were A Winner To Me
This is so touching because its a real case in many lives. it make you wonder about what is really going on and how people are being viewed by others. ...
Jul 7, 2016 -
Re: Heroes of Aldrizhon: Return of the Banished (Chapter II)
This is very interesting and I can't wait for you to write more. My only thing is that you are missing a few commas and perhaps combining some sentences. This ...
Jul 7, 2016 -
Re: Chapter one.
This is a good start but I would just clarify who you are talking about in the beginning. I got a little confused when you kept mentioning he and him ...
Jul 7, 2016