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I really like this introduction. It sets up the premise really well and I like the dynamic between Maddie and Sarah. The conversation between them feels natural, but I also ...

I like the concept, it's a very thought provoking idea and if done right can be a really, really powerful story forcing the reader to face their own choices and ...

I like the references back to biblical stories. The first few lines had me hooked, very well written, flowed from one line to the next. The second half lost me ...