DylanRay

I am sorry if it is too short. I wrote it in a rush and post it quickly. I haven't even write the plot and all that yet! I will ...

Thank you Azila~~!!! I don't really know what to say,but i always thank people for their advise!So again,thank you!!!Hehe~~~Yeah,I almost forgot that you are going to review my novel,cause it ...

Okay now everyone~~~This is the 3rd chapter of On The Road~ Feel free to give comments and advise~~~!!! Cause I really need them~~~Hehe~~~ ~~~Love, Dylan

Hey Meep~~~Thank you for your advise~~~ I changed the follow already. I really love you all guys for giving me advises~~~Thank you Meep~~~ By the way, can I know who ...

Hey Step~~~ I rewrote it again~~~ I made a few changes but if you want to know you'll have to find them yourself~~~ Thank you very much~~~ Here's something I ...

Hey Step~! How have you been too? It is a long time since you online(I think so). I really like you very much. You seems to be very pro in ...

Hi everyone~Okay, now this is my 2nd chapter. I think there's not gonna be a problem because I had already read it 3 times and re wrote it.(At least that's ...

What book is this? Never seen it before. I only saw the Percy Jackson series at the book shop that day. And also lots and lots of Harry Potter series...

BAbe~ Thank you for your advise~~~!I did change a little bit of my novel. And I admit that my grammar is not good . The verb and past tense thing, ...

Hope you guys like it! Thanks for posting your comment~!!! Step~~!!!I re write it again~~~!!! Please read it and give me your advice~~!!! ~~~Dylan

Step,thank you for your comment~ Yes, I think I am confuse about the past tense and the present tense when writing these novel. But I really can't explain the character ...

Please leave a comment~!I want your advise please~!!!This is my first novel and I don't know if it's good or bad!First time! Please!And if there are people who want me ...

Whoa~I think this seems like an adventure novel more than a romantic novel!Is they going to be a second part and chapter 2? Like the roses~Keep on writing~Good job~

Is they another chapter?I think this is one good story you had write when you are small.Not bad.I kinda like it.8-10?yeah,we are like small creative authors when we are young.But ...

Hey!Good writing skills!!!I can't wait to see the next chapter.Yup,it minght be a little bit too short.But I like what you are writing.Good job!!!Keep it up!!!(Pls write the next chapter!!!)