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*looks at sentence* lol. you're right. It should be taut. I wonder how a voice can be "taught"? *giggles to self* And yeah, the shoulder thing did come from you, ...

Crayon - no, I haven't brought five in before this. I didn't really see that I needed an angry voice for Jenn until I started writing this one... Mesh - ...

Maybe one day I'll have enough to make a whole book of them. lol. Are you serious??? DO EET! DO EET! That would be so cool to have a collection ...

Yay, Dusky, another Voices! Yay! Another Voices! They keep coming out... I don't know why! I think they're just becoming my signature piece. Maybe one day I'll have enough to ...

I love Parables, Grif. Congrats on writing one about the power of comprehension.

I had a lot of fun reading a rather darkly amused way. It's got a staccatto tone, creepy with the interjected 'voices' and the light-hearted teenage banter. I haven't read ...

Shakespeare is difficult because he wrote in a time that we don't understand very well anymore. His writing is actually fairly straightforward if you understand the phrases that he used. ...

That section that I pointed out looks much better now. I think you only changed one sentence, but it makes a huge difference in the way it reads. As for ...

Well... I'm working on getting into the swing of this story. You all should be happy to know that it now has a title (check out the title of the ...

Yeah. Most of this is pretty implausible. It needs some major reworking. *shudders* I'll work on it. Chapter 11 Escaping was almost easy. The King wanted me brought to him ...

Thumbs up so far, anyways. I love your writing style, especially as it's so different from my own. Only thing I would say is that sometimes it can be hard ...

*singsoffkey* - yes. I was rather proud of Distance for that. lol. Kay Juran - *blushes* thank you. But I have to admit, I have a really really hard time ...

Okay... I'm posting the next chapter because I was asked to. Just as a warning, I haven't looked at this in a little over forever, and this is just being ...

It isn't my normal style because it was written quite a while ago. Over a year ago, I think. This isn't by any means finished, so that's why there isn't ...

*blushes* Thanks... a lot. Just spelled "peeked" wrong. That's all. *snaps fingers* darn... I don't know why, but I seemed to have a mental block against spelling "peek" P-E-E-K the ...