Duskglimmer

This confused me. I'm not sure entirely what you were trying to say, but I think you over complicated it with all the different descriptions. I think it would be ...

This seems a little short. I think you've got some nice images, but it could be better if you took some more time to explain exactly what you're saying...

Thanks! I'm glad that you enjoyed it...

Any particular reason why? Or did it just not do anything for you?

Thanks y'all! Hunter - I really couldn't think of anythign that needed to be said in that line... the fact that we're walking through life was established in the first ...

*blinks* it rhymes? *rereads poem* oh... wow... it does... okay, wasn't trying to do that... okay... thanks for the comments...

*laughs and shrugs* I am a dialouge person.

[center]Chapter 5[/center] The Navigator 9000 swung about and entered the shuttle bay with ease. Shereth watched the sleek bluish-gray ship through the bay doors, studying it’s every facet. Gray-sil

*shrugs* well... I guess you can't please everyone. Thanks for your comments y'all.

Shereth looked towards the shower for a moment and then sat down at her desk to get a little work done first, flipping up the screen of her computer. [tt]Search ...

Chapter 6 Diren led me in and sat me in front of Ilen. Slowly, she closed the door. I stared. They NEVER closed the door unless they were going to ...

Thank you both. And I know that description is one of my major problems... But I just enjoy writing the dialouge so much more!!! lol, any ways... thanks for the ...

Aye, that's what I meant. And I'll have more up within the next few days.

Thanks. Chapter 4 Ready elbowed me in the ribs again, interrupting my meal for the millionth time. “Fal-con,” she said, jamming her four-year-old face in my own. “Fal-con.” “Read-y,” I ...

Chapter 4 “Come on, Endar,” Shereth said. “You can’t be tired yet!” “You want to bet?” He shot back. They skated around a bend in the path and slowed to ...