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My word... that was not what I expected when I clicked on this thread, but it made me laugh.

*laughs and blushes* thanks... tweaking is under way...

I have to admit, I have no idea what you're talking about really... I thought I got it until that last line, but then it sort of threw me... But ...

Okay... I reread this thing like a dozen times trying to find SOMETHING I didn't like about this. But I couldn't. This is so true and so awesome. You really ...

yup. Cool guy. *jaw drops* you lucky frog!!!

The Hobbit can be a fun read, but it's really more of a kid's story than the other books and I didn't enjoy it as much. You can read it ...

I agree that the structure was a little weird, but I enjoyed it. Nicely done.

Okay. Thanks for the explanation.

I would love to give you some suggestions... but I just can't come up with any. My sister went to college this past year, and I feel this piece all ...

Two words: Excellent. Creepy. *shudders* I absolutely loved that last line. It's so... I don't know... I'm wanting to describe it as profound, but I hate using that word. It's ...

I have to agree with Reicheru. There was so much imagery and fancy wording crammed into a very short piece. I think it would be much easier to read if ...

Thank you so much. I don't think I'll be adding anything more onto this particular piece though...

Thank you. I was actually combining several different things in this... Pieces of myself (like trying to drown out thoughts when you just can't), Pieces of my boyfriend, (like trying ...

Thanks y'all. THIS IS SO GOOD!!! OMG! Do you have one for the Fellowship of the Ring? I want to read more of your scripts :twisted: lol. I don't have ...

lol. Thanks. I really need to check back here more often. I keep forgetting what stories I have up where, and what stories I need to update. Give me just ...