Duskglimmer

I have to say, I really did not get anything that was going on here. It seemed sort of jumped and mixed up and I have no idea how all ...

It made for interesting reading. But I have to say that the use of the word "solved" in line four, really killed it for me. If that's the way you ...

Simons Diary By Cathy Scott Monday 5th June 1987 I am called Simon. My full name is Simon George Hari. I hate it. I hate my whole life. The whole ...

I like this, but there's just one quick thing that jumped out at me. There was a man, nigh sixty years, Nigh sixty years had he, And not quite almost ...

nitpick of the day: But that’s never goona happen "goona" should be "gonna". but that's just a typo. I really liked this. The subject was one I could really relate ...

For me, I got a little to caught in all the long words that I didn't understand, but honestly, I think that it's part of the reason it works. I ...

It was severely lacking for me. I didn't feel anything throughout the whole thing. You're talking about hearts breaking and things like that, and all I'm seeing is a bunch ...

The repitition didn't jump out at me. I had to go looking for it. But that may just be the tired state I'm in right now (I was up until ...

As Boni_Bee said, this needs to get broken up. Having it all in one big lump makes it very easy to lose you place while reading it and therefore makes ...

Um... is there a more expressive way to say wow? because I really need it right now. I really really liked this, Bobo. My only objection is that you held ...

Glad you liked it. Actually, I was deadly afraid someone would see this and comment...but you guys have been nice. Hm...:) The point of this was to be random, so ...

*blinks* well... this is very interesting... I love how threads go off topic and then it takes someone else coming in to put it back on track... But as for ...

I had a lot of difficultly keeping my attention on this. For some reason I kept getting lost in the lines and the wording and wondering just what you were ...

firstly, "mear" should be "mere", but that's a just a spelling error and is easily fixed. The poem itself is on something that I think just about every writer has ...

I really liked the first two stanzas, but after that things felt just a little cliched to me... but that may be because I've heard so many people say this ...