Duncan

Thank you for reviewing. I will surely correct this. :)

Thank you for your comment! :)

Thank you for your review and helping me finding my grammatical mistakes. :)

Sorry for the re-post, due to another error. Sorry!

The re-post is a mistake due to system error. Sorry about that. :)

Thank you for your review! :)

Thank you for your advice! I will edit it if I get time. :)

Well.. neither. I just imagined the whole thing...

And in my mind Clement did not cheat and lie at all. Yes. It was just the dark side of his mind discouraging him. I hope it helped you to ...

Thank you for your review, and I am working on the part of the narrators now. Thanks!

Thank you for your review! Well, in fact I may not write a second part because I think the whole story is ended, but if you said so I might ...

I know the 'cadet' part is quite messy, and I really don't know how to put it. (*sighs) And the flag raising part- what I thought was that Jan and ...

Thank you for your review! By a school cadet I want to say units, or groups set up by different service groups in schools, like Youth Units of Hong Kong ...

Thank you for your review! :)

I have not been reviewing since December, so this might be a little bit awkward. Anyway let's start. I think this is an interesting idea. I love reading dark stories, ...