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Re: The Changing Stars (Chapter 1.1) (LMS)
Glad to know I helped!
Jul 5, 2018 -
Re: the ceiling is her new sky
Alright then. Thank you for answering! C:
Jan 28, 2018 -
Re: the ceiling is her new sky
Ah, I see now. I'll have to search up Walt Whitman and Gary Young sometime. Thanks for being so informative! I appreciate it. c:
Jan 28, 2018 -
Re: the ceiling is her new sky
dANG DG BACK AT IT AGAIN WITH THE SICK MEMES oh wait you're izanami now *thumbs up* Cool name change! c:
Jan 28, 2018 -
Re: the ceiling is her new sky
Thank you for the review!
Jan 28, 2018 -
Re: the ceiling is her new sky
I'm not sure what category it's meant to be in either, hence the Other, heh. Just wondering, what characteristics does this piece have to be considered prose poetry? I have ...
Jan 28, 2018 -
Re: WWMO Chapter 1.1
I didn't get a notification for this review, so that's kinda weird? But that aside, your insight is super helpful and you've put a lot of my worries to rest. ...
Oct 13, 2017 -
Re: WWMO Chapter 1.1
Shoot, you're right about the 50 degrees. Thank you for pointing that out, Kara! I'm changing that and the rating (and the grammar mistake) right now. And thank you for ...
Oct 10, 2017 -
Re: WWMO Chapter 1.1
To be honest, I am very nervous about sharing my work, since I haven't done so in a long time and I'm not sure it's even worth sharing anymore. I'm ...
Oct 10, 2017 -
Re: Mistaken Identity? Part 2
Alright, I'll get to it tomorrow~! Also, reading back on this, I realise I (wrongly?) assumed the missing letters in the note were a result of the waiter smudging the ...
Sep 3, 2017 -
Re: Mistaken Identity?
Ohh, great! I read through it and already saw some improvement, so great job on that :D It'll be the first thing I review for RevMo , which is just ...
Aug 28, 2017 -
Re: She Is
Aha, no;;; though this was written during a time where I could easily put myself into the main character's shoes, I guess. A good chunk of this was probably wish ...
Feb 26, 2017 -
Re: She Is
Ahhhhh, thank you so much for the review! To be honest, I haven't been writing much these days, but hearing your thoughts has made me want to write again. :D ...
Jan 29, 2017 -
Re: I'll turn you into nothing
Just thought I'd point out the fourth line: nothing and nothing into 6 Isn't that 7 syllables instead of 6? Or am I hallucinating? :D Great poem either way.
Nov 12, 2016 -
Re: She Is
It's nice to know what I'm doing right, at least! :) Thank you for the kind review!
Oct 25, 2016
