Dulcet

Let me start by saying the prologue is unnecessary, because you already have a great start in Chapter 1! Prologues should really only be used if you want to tell ...

(Welcome to YWS! I'm just a few days old on here as well, and I'm enjoying my time here so hopefully you are too.) This prologue certainly leaves me wanting ...

This review is going to be more nitpicks than anything else, to be honest. You already have a good grip on storytelling, and the story itself is really interesting! The ...

Instantly, I'm hooked. I love the first sentence. The simple detail about the wet sleeve just says so much, and to start the story with it sets the scene already. ...

Nice start! The beginning paragraph is certainly intriguing, and I wonder who 'she' is. Just be careful about paragraph spacing, because it's very easy for readers to lose their place ...

Hi, this is my first review so I'm sorry if it's a bit iffy! Hopefully the quote tags work. First, I want to say I love the characters already. They're ...