DukeofWonderland

Thanks anyways ^_^ And yeah, I did take the 2nd scene out in my re-edited submission.

Hahah, okay. You should know, I'm not dogs. I'm Duke. :P And thank you so much for taking the time to give such a thoughtful review. I was in an ...

Yes, thank you. A lot. ^_^

1.*does *get *wrapped up And blood got into her food BEFORE she went to the ER. 2. It was written for college writing contest. The prompt of that has been ...

Okay, I'm not an awesome reviewer but here's a shot. I love the concept, there's no pattern in the stanzas though. But most people don't have any. And some words ...

I have a question: if you had to improve at least one aspect in this piece, what would that be?

Thank you.

Well, the lady was killed by her companion- our narrator. Thank you, but you could've been criticizing more - I would truly not mind. Rather I'd apreciate it. :) Thanks ...

Thanks.

-.- seriously?

Yes, I do have a major issue with punctuation. I don't understand it, don't feel it. And I'm not quite certain of how punctuation works in poetry so yeah thanks ...

Yes, I do have a major issue with punctuation. I don't understand it, don't feel it. And I'm not quite certain of how punctuation works in poetry so yeah thanks ...

Nah, I'm sorry to say this is a stand alone piece. And thanks for pointing that out, I never noticed that myself. Ironic, and wrong isn't it then? Shall change ...

Nah, I'm sorry to say this is a stand alone piece. And thanks for pointing that out, I never noticed that myself. Ironic, and wrong isn't it then? Shall change ...

Thank you. And feel free to rip my writings apart. You don't have to keep up the compliments. But compliments are always fully appreciated. ;D