DukeofWonderland

Why are you an anteater? Well you can't quite edit a lot in lyrics, it's music. Very violent wording, ow...maybe too many expletives, but asa I already said- it's music. ...

All is lost,But losing is nothing.When nothing is left,That could ever be lost. Nice one:) Because all is gone,And behind us is destruction.Created from by sounds more proper in this ...

Cute avatar:) Laying on my soft settling bed, you could omit this word, flows better without it relaxing every bone in my body. Nothing springs to mind about/ What am ...

He’s sociable to both genders, even to those having two genders- you know what I mean? Yes, I laughed at that. At some times when my father and I are ...

Guess what? I've just been thinking the same thing for days now, I guess since I joined this site. I actually packed up all my writings, evey thing I 've ...

Hey desire, you're from South Africa or you like just live there? I guess this should be on your wall not review. Sorry, I'm jst a little too lazy:P There ...

Yes, I like poems they're so much better to read. And yes I actually finished reading one of mikepyro's. Maybe they should do this review day more often I have ...

Is that a women a is singular and 1 person is being spoken of so replace it by woman. Maybe it was just a typing mistake. Well, I like the ...

When I sat back down he was scowling at the screen. Yup, I couldn't continue reading from there onwards. Your writing is very smooth and clear. the grammar and writing ...

Alex gasped. “Abi that isn’t it at all-” “Have you got everything packed?” Jasmine cut across them in a stern tone, abruptly ending the conversation. Okay so I lost it ...

It seemed quite deep and maybe too deep for me to understand though. But I think I got the real essence. Swinging from a tree, can you see her mischievous ...

I LOVE your writing style; perfect flow, and pace. Even though I still don't know what War of the Swans is here, I can bet it's going to be a ...

That was a surprisingly short poem. the silence that makes a goldfish bowl around you My chatter is a paper aeroplane that hits the glass and falls away it’s a ...

That was very cute and sort of funny too. Well usually. The last para was scary. And I really liked the contrast in these two paras: We are monsters chaos ...

Your poem was very intricately described and that was very amazing. The physical feelings were so nicely written I can actually feel it and you know what I know exactly ...