Ducati

I guess tone of voice is hard to get over the internet. I must have misread arrogance in your reply.

If it's so brilliant, then you obviously don't need my opinion. Sorry I wasted my time.

Thank you for your very lengthy review, do you know, I'd forgotten I'd even asked for it! I will make some changes to the stanza you mentioned, it has always ...

Thanky ou so much. I will work on everything you said. Excellent review! BY the way, you said you like the name Asha, it means hope. Just thought you might ...

The little things are the most important :D Doesn't hold a candle to you is a saying, but I'm not sure if it's just unique to one country or something. ...

I'm sitting at my computer blushing furiously right now. You guys really make me want to polish this piece and write more. Thank you.

Oh you like me, you really like me! Just kidding. Thanks for the reviews. I've been trying to think of how to change the 3rd stanza so it doesn't almost ...

Did you know that Descartes had a thing for women with one eye? I think it was him at least. Funny things you learn in class. Also, I forgot to ...

Hi voxina, since your piece has profanity in it, I've given it the rating of PG-13. Please make sure to rate your pieces in the future. Am I the only ...

I kinda didn't want to give too much away, sorry I confused some people! I've been told I tell too much rather than show, so I thought I'd wouldn't spill ...

Thank you very much! Best constructive critism I have had on this site so far :) But, about the language, I mean, teens talk that way! Have you seen the ...

I suppose it was cliched. But I didn't think that was necesarily bad, I just felt how the poem was, you know? I'll keep writing, for sure. I hope you'll ...

Just re-read my critique and I sounded like a total bitch, sorry. I was annoyed because it had potential, but you overwrote it. Just simplify it a little, calm down ...

Damnit, I do always have trouble with telling not showing. The punctuation marks, my computer did that, couldn't make it normal. I really don't get it! Sigh, I know you ...

I read it when I was 13 or 14 I think and I loved it! So engrossing. Such a book. I also loved animal farm. Suprsisingly, I really like his ...