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  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Realistic Re: I Knew Chapter 11

    Hey there, Alice here for today's review! MY FIRST THOUGHTS Liked this chapter as well, but I am more excited for the next one to see what Zybryn has to ...

    Jun 13, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Realistic Re: I Knew Chapter 10

    Hey there, Alice here with a review! MY FIRST THOUGHTS Finally, a conversation, if you can even call it happened between our mysterious model boy and Jed. The awkwardness was ...

    Jun 12, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Realistic Re: I Knew Chapter 9

    Hey there, Alice here to give a review! My THOUGHTS This chapter flew by real quick, it seemed like a short chapter compared to other ones. Let's get into it: ...

    Jun 11, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Fantasy Re: The Wizards and the Desk Pets-Chapter 6

    Hey there, Alice here to give a review! MY FIRST THOUGHT Wow, quite a lot to digest! It was quite a fun read. I don't know much about the story ...

    Jun 10, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Realistic Re: I Knew Chapter 8

    Hey there, Alice here to give a review! MY FIRST THOUGHTS A nice little chapter! A good continuation! Kassie nodded. “I don’t think you’re wrong, but yikes!” Her excited eyes ...

    Jun 10, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Realistic Re: I Knew Chapter 7

    Hey there, Alice here to give a review! MY FIRST THOUGHTS This was a nice little continued chapter. There was not much said in this chapter as compared to the ...

    Jun 9, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Realistic Re: I Knew Chapter 6

    Hey there, Alice here for today's review! MY FIRST THOUGHTS I hope you are not bored seeing me every time reviewing your chapters lol. So yeah a very interesting story ...

    Jun 8, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Realistic Re: I Knew Chapter 5

    Hey there, Alice here to give a review! MY THOUGHTS We are moving on with the story, this seemed like a calm episode which continued the story further. Let's get ...

    Jun 7, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Realistic Re: I Knew Chapter 4

    Hey there, Alice here to give a review! MY THOUGHTS This chapter impressed me even more than the previous one after I reviewed the chapter, I went and read the ...

    Jun 6, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Realistic Re: I Knew Chapter 3

    Hey there, Alice here to give a review! MY FIRST THOUGHTS I really liked it this seems to be a very well-thought-out and planned novel. I am quite interested in ...

    Jun 5, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Spectator's Gambit: Part. 1, Chapter 1

    Hey HB1103, Alice here to give a review! MY FIRST THOUGHTS I could already see that you are very passionate about your first novel, you did a great job! The ...

    Jun 4, 2023
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: Pitch black

    Hey Cage, Alice here to give a review! MY THOUGHTS Really liked the poem. It is neatly written with a clear metaphor, reflecting real emotions you must have felt to ...

    Jun 3, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Romantic Re: "Not Today but Someday" Chapter

    Hey, Alice here to give a review! This was a nice little introduction to the characters and your story. I like your writing, it is exciting and easy to read ...

    Jun 2, 2023
  • Poetry » Literature, Realistic Re: A Heavy Anchor (Pain)

    Hey there, Alice here to give a review! MY THOUGHTS Let's start with the title "A Heavy Anchor". Ah that itself speaks like a heavy pain that has lingered in ...

    Jun 1, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Fall - Chapter One

    Hey there, Alice here to give a review! MY FIRST THOUGHTS This was very interesting, I absolutely enjoyed it! I am in love with the replies and conversations between the ...

    Mar 26, 2023


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