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Re: Ricochet
Hey Alice is here to give a review This is a marvelous poem no doubt and you made it rhyme so perfectly, it must have been a hard job to ...
Jan 31, 2021 -
Re: What Lies Beneath
Hey Alice is here to give a review!!!! I am quite interested in this novel and where this story will lead. And your descriptions are really nice it really helps ...
Jan 31, 2021 -
Re: #Heist Part 1
Hey Alice is here to review!!! A very well written and exciting chapter. It is very interesting and the diologues are fun to read. All the punctuations are right there ...
Jan 31, 2021 -
Re: Tree Girl Chapter 10
Hey Alice is here to give a review!!! Good work Hannah you are doing great so far and as I wanted you have added a character with whom Elana could ...
Jan 31, 2021 -
Re: The Lost Dragon 6.1
Hey Alice is here to review! Omg it was just mind blowing! I don't know what to say it was totally unexpected and Clanny is over 100 years old I ...
Jan 24, 2021 -
Re: The Lost Dragon 4.3
Hey Alice is here to give a review!!! I can't miss this chapter there are so many things going on, first they went into a worms mouth(yuck so slimy and ...
Jan 19, 2021 -
Re: The Lost Dragon 4.1
Hey Alice is here to review! So Clandestine seems to have a great plan in her mind about how to deal with the worms and goblins, otherwise she wouldn't have ...
Jan 18, 2021 -
Re: A new year's murder
Hey Alice is here to review! You are very good at writing you didn't made even a single grammar mistake and the suspense and mystery was very cool. The clock ...
Jan 18, 2021 -
Re: The Lost Dragon 3.3
Hey Alice is here to review! Clandestine is never going to be out of my favorite characters list. She is funny as well as smart. I am quite interested how ...
Jan 17, 2021 -
Re: The Lost Dragon 3.2
Here Alice is here to review! A great chapter as always. So goblins are going to get involved and after reading this I remember goblins make tunnels so that must ...
Jan 17, 2021 -
Re: Prison Break
Hey Alice is here to review! I find it a very interesting plot, where they are relocated to the moon I guess it can happen in the future. It was ...
Jan 17, 2021 -
Re: The Lost Dragon 3.1
Hey Alice is again here to review! I know you don't need them but it would be a waist if I don't do a review after reading this amazing chapter. ...
Jan 16, 2021 -
Re: The Lost Dragon 2.2
Hey Alice is here to give a review! Looks like you are a great writer you know how to seek attention the ghost story was a mind blowing idea it ...
Jan 14, 2021 -
Re: The Lost Dragon 2.1
Hey Alice is again here to give a review!(as a matter of fact this is my last review before getting my new star) As always this is so interesting and ...
Jan 7, 2021 -
Re: Endangered - Chapter 1
Hey Alice is here to review! Well you made me remember the most famous cartoon and one of my favorite Pokémon. It was a fun and entertaining read. I liked ...
Jan 7, 2021
