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  • Script » Dramatic, Historical Fiction Re: Homecoming (Part 1, Revised)

    Hello there! I'm here to give you a short review. So, let's get to business. :D It's a great story line to begin with. Looking at it psychologically, it's a ...

    Sep 7, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Sinking into another night

    Okay, this is too good to criticise. Hmmm. Hey there, Dreamy here. To be honest , I didn't know that the woman was killed by the narrator or anyone for ...

    Aug 21, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: I'm a faggot

    Hello there! Dreamy here for a short review. Alright, on with the story. I liked your story line, though it was bit cliched. But I think you killed those cliches ...

    Aug 18, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: The relation that was never made.

    Woah! That was something. Hello there! Let's get to a quick review. First goes the nitpicks. thought a few modern age posh apartments had mushroomed in its vicinity, in due ...

    Aug 17, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Prologue: the Legend (Flash fiction)

    Hello there! Dreamy here for a review. This is going to be short. They call me "The Scarf man". I think this opening line had an huge impact with me. ...

    Aug 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: forget me gently

    Hello there! Dreamy here to review your work for poetry exchange. This was a good read. For some reason, I thought it would sound well if it is rapped out. ...

    Aug 3, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Deleted

    Hello there! Dreamy here for a short review. I liked how you started your scene and the your description had this poetic uncertainty. Most of the time, I didn't understand/follow ...

    Jul 6, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Same Pain

    Hey there! Dreamy here for a short review. I do agree with the other reviewers about the description part. Descriptions of any sort, let it be about the characters or ...

    Jul 3, 2014
  • Short Story » Narrative, Fantasy Re: The Boy Who Cried Wolf

    Hello there, Dreamy here for a review. The story was interesting and rather precise, like a definition to a theory. But then again, it was very good. The repetition of ...

    Jun 30, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Fantasy Re: That Damn Smirk

    Hey there! As I said it was deep and sensual. The most beautiful thing about the poem is that, it was decent concerning the matter. And the feelings of the ...

    Jun 24, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Supernatural Re: Diakrino- The Darkness within (chapter 7)

    What? O.O It was Henry all this while? O.O Hey! Here we are, once again! So, let's go on with the review. The twist with Henry was swell. I liked ...

    Jun 19, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Supernatural Re: Diakrino- The Darkness within (chapter 6)

    Hey there! Dreamy here to review your work, finally. :P This was a good chapter. I wouldn't say better because, there were lots of places that didn't quite make sense, ...

    Jun 17, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Dramatic Re: The Perfect Thief Chapter 2

    Hi! :P You are like the Mahaan of Metaphors. xD Well, in just few years, people are going to analysis your metaphors and torture the kids to understand/study them. :P ...

    Jun 15, 2014
  • Short Story » General, General Re: An ordinairy day with a roommate

    Hey there! Dreamy here to review your rather amusing piece of work. There were lots of things happening in you, as a writer and as the character itself. You had ...

    Jun 7, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Supernatural Re: Diakrino- The Darkness within (chapter 5)

    Hey there, Dreamy here to review your work. This one was a another creepy chapter. You seem to add new things and new twist in every chapter of yours. Which ...

    May 26, 2014


The greatest part of a writer’s time is spent in reading, in order to write; a man will turn over half a library to make one book.
— Samuel Johnson