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Re: Homecoming (Part 1, Revised)
Hello there! I'm here to give you a short review. So, let's get to business. :D It's a great story line to begin with. Looking at it psychologically, it's a ...
Sep 7, 2014 -
Re: Sinking into another night
Okay, this is too good to criticise. Hmmm. Hey there, Dreamy here. To be honest , I didn't know that the woman was killed by the narrator or anyone for ...
Aug 21, 2014 -
Re: I'm a faggot
Hello there! Dreamy here for a short review. Alright, on with the story. I liked your story line, though it was bit cliched. But I think you killed those cliches ...
Aug 18, 2014 -
Re: The relation that was never made.
Woah! That was something. Hello there! Let's get to a quick review. First goes the nitpicks. thought a few modern age posh apartments had mushroomed in its vicinity, in due ...
Aug 17, 2014 -
Re: Prologue: the Legend (Flash fiction)
Hello there! Dreamy here for a review. This is going to be short. They call me "The Scarf man". I think this opening line had an huge impact with me. ...
Aug 17, 2014 -
Re: forget me gently
Hello there! Dreamy here to review your work for poetry exchange. This was a good read. For some reason, I thought it would sound well if it is rapped out. ...
Aug 3, 2014 -
Re: Deleted
Hello there! Dreamy here for a short review. I liked how you started your scene and the your description had this poetic uncertainty. Most of the time, I didn't understand/follow ...
Jul 6, 2014 -
Re: Same Pain
Hey there! Dreamy here for a short review. I do agree with the other reviewers about the description part. Descriptions of any sort, let it be about the characters or ...
Jul 3, 2014 -
Re: The Boy Who Cried Wolf
Hello there, Dreamy here for a review. The story was interesting and rather precise, like a definition to a theory. But then again, it was very good. The repetition of ...
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: That Damn Smirk
Hey there! As I said it was deep and sensual. The most beautiful thing about the poem is that, it was decent concerning the matter. And the feelings of the ...
Jun 24, 2014 -
Re: Diakrino- The Darkness within (chapter 7)
What? O.O It was Henry all this while? O.O Hey! Here we are, once again! So, let's go on with the review. The twist with Henry was swell. I liked ...
Jun 19, 2014 -
Re: Diakrino- The Darkness within (chapter 6)
Hey there! Dreamy here to review your work, finally. :P This was a good chapter. I wouldn't say better because, there were lots of places that didn't quite make sense, ...
Jun 17, 2014 -
Re: The Perfect Thief Chapter 2
Hi! :P You are like the Mahaan of Metaphors. xD Well, in just few years, people are going to analysis your metaphors and torture the kids to understand/study them. :P ...
Jun 15, 2014 -
Re: An ordinairy day with a roommate
Hey there! Dreamy here to review your rather amusing piece of work. There were lots of things happening in you, as a writer and as the character itself. You had ...
Jun 7, 2014 -
Re: Diakrino- The Darkness within (chapter 5)
Hey there, Dreamy here to review your work. This one was a another creepy chapter. You seem to add new things and new twist in every chapter of yours. Which ...
May 26, 2014
