Dreamwriter

Thanks, I appriciate your imput. :)

One more thing I forgot to mention. Please give it a better title.

Yeah, I can see your point and I appreciate you input. But you've got to understand, the human race has such a wide range of emotions! Most people in the ...

This is terrific. I'm not usually one for poetry and what not, but this is something that will stick with me. Keep it up. You're doing great.

It was cool. I liked it. I read it a few years ago and I remember thinking "I love this author's imagination."

that was a fun poem. It was cute and to the point. It stops and makes you think. I was unique. Good job.

This is an example of all people's eventual inability to face themselves. It's great to be able to see these things and put it into such well woven words.

You had good rythem. The intent was clear. The subject made me stop and think. (That's a good thing.) You should keep it up. nice job.

This world needs more poems like this. I could really feel the elated joy behind each word. I loved how you seemed to gaze into the deeper reaches of everything. ...

Woah. So much emotion coming from a teapot. It really shows how creative you are. All poems need rythem, and yours came with a beat that came to meet me. ...

Wow. Good job. I could feel your turmoil leaping off the page. This is what the world needs, someone who can weave words to REALLY express themselves. Good rythem.

This is kinda cool, but I couldn't feel a rythem to you words. Most all poems need rythem, and it wasn't there. Though, the intent behind your words were great.