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Re: Forked (2)
But, finding myself clearly portrayed in his mirror-like eyes as an elephant, I don't get it. Does this mean he's fat? Or am I being stupid and missing something totally ...
Mon Dec 15, 2008 3:37 pm -
Re: Forked (1)
really weird things that end with you waking up on the floor, are probably dreams. No need for the comma after floor. The smeared mirror that hung next to my ...
Mon Dec 15, 2008 3:30 pm -
Re: Stella's Chronicles: Love and War
Freeeaaaky! I'd be way too scared to write something like this! I have to hand it to you for your courage! Why haven't you written more? Get on with it ...
Sun Dec 14, 2008 11:29 pm -
Re: Prologue of my story
Yes, I do like that one better. You should use it.
Sun Dec 07, 2008 2:16 am -
Re: untitled ( the raid maybe) -part one
and my arm round his head, My arm around his head. I heard Jim deep voice scream Did you mean: I heard Jim scream in his deep voice? Makes more ...
Thu Nov 27, 2008 7:27 pm -
Re: icarly: iCRASH!
Sorry, made no sense to me. It was too confusing to be funny. You need to improve on grammar and spelling.
Wed Oct 29, 2008 4:06 am -
Re: Clover's Curse (redone)
Thanks for all the reviews, guys! Mucho appreciato!
Tue Jul 29, 2008 6:51 pm -
Re: Land of Sky, Land of Rain (Chapter Two)
Ooh I wonder what happens next? Quite frankly, I'm happy someone has finally created a heroic tale with a girl.
Mon Jul 28, 2008 6:50 pm -
Re: Moonfield (Chapter 5 + Chapter 6)
I'm writing the review right now. Hang on, this could take a while......
Wed Jul 23, 2008 4:03 am -
Re: Curses, Spells, Fate and Coincidence
At the moment the story is pretty simple. And as for the name, I had nothing to do with it. I really don't like the name Clover either. This is ...
Sun Jul 20, 2008 4:32 am