Dreamwalker

Ugnnnnnn. I'll be back for this. Yes, I will be back for this.

It was on the short side, but I was at a lose for criticism. Ignore the typos for I fear there are many and I just don't have the heart ...

Or, rather, not in advance. How silly of me.

I'll be all over this shortly. If not, I reserve you the right to poke me to the point of submission.

Oh doll, if I had time, I would totally sink my teeth into this. Expect a review tonight. Around 8:45ish your time. If it's not there, kick me.

The dashes were actually a punctuation bit I took from prose xD. If you look at the line written out without the breaks, it would look like this; I sometimes ...

Kudos on catching that awful error xD. And I have a bit of a habit of writing really ridiculous titles these days. Nothing really seemed to mesh well with this ...

I'm coming back for this. Poke me.

Props on that first stanza, though. I would ditch the rest of this just for that first bit.

As always, I'm coming back for this ;)

This deserves an honorary review. Ohhhh so many things to say. I'll be back. ;)

And ignore the typos. I should probably have reread this before I posted, dear.

I'll be back for this. If I'm not, poke me.

Hrmm. I don't particularly know if there is a real way of reviewing this as a piece of poetry, so I don't think I'm going to. Mind you, I'm not ...

Only one flaw to that notion. You just wrote a poem about that emotion. You are conveying emotion to readers. Better yet, you're conveying the one thing you didn't particularly ...