Dreamwalker

Daisuki, I'm actually rather enthralled with this piece. In fact, I'm quite excited to say the least. It left an impression that most emotional pieces could not, plus the underlying ...

Hello Dani! First off, I would like to start off with how this imagery is rather... interesting. I love the ideology of it and the way it flows off the ...

I thought it was about time that I returned the favor for those lovely reviews you gave up today! So here we go, then. Now first off, I wanted to ...

I feel the need to state that it is this kind of logic that kills dreams. Now, the cliche answer would be to respond with either a 'You can do ...

The thing about poetry is that not only does it come from a hard place, but it also explains ones woes in a manner that is beautiful. The utter contradiction. ...

Alright so you have what appears to be a very nice structure. The beginning of something interesting. The first step. Everyone and everything needs that step first and foremost so ...

First off, I'd like to say that I admire the courage of this poem. Its outright as you clearly what to get the emotion across and for the most part, ...

Alright, this piece is interesting. You're directing the entirety of it to an emotion that many teenagers feel so its rather easy to understand and relate. The problem with taking ...

What an interesting voice! I think that's what really drew me into this piece of fiction. The narrators voice is a little more sardonic than the usual melancholy main character. ...

Howdy, Cad! Walker here with a review, as requested. And might I start off by saying this had a strangely interesting feel! I was a little bit confused on the ...

First off, I want to say I absolutely adore the sardonic narration you choose to start this play off. This character, David, uses his irony well, so that's a nice ...

Ah yes, we all must escape with our books. Its why some of us became writers, cause deep down, we all know the book must end and that life would ...

So this is the poem you feel bad for not getting too many reviews for? Well, might I help fix that review count for you ;D Of course, if you ...

This is beyond beautiful, Hibiscus. Beyond beautiful. Normally, if I like a poem on here a lot, I won't review it because its really hard to sit and compliment someone. ...

The blunt honesty in poetry can often be a double-edged sword. Having poetry without really strong imagery or diction can be seen as childish, juvenile, and some may consider it ...