Dreamwalker

Lumichu, you poet you. This poem is very, very open. The subject matter is something in which is dark - though I know you're not a fan of your depressing ...

Lumichu, those last two stanza's made this. Absolutely made this. I was skeptical as I usually am with most prose-like pieces. It came across as being very... telly and it ...

You know, this is the second poem I have read about your want to kill your mother, and quite frankly, I'm going to try to pretend that this isn't about ...

To show my love and adoration for you, I came to review this ;D. So, first off, lets start with praise, seeing as a greater portion of my thoughts on ...

This is actually rather cute. I agree that it has a rather cheeky tone, but what I like most about it is that it reminds me of my childhood years, ...

This was jumpy to say the least. You are trying to give interesting imagery. I can see that and as much as I would like to gulp it all down, ...

I was recommended this piece and, quite frankly, I can understand why. This is great description. Great emotion. You go into the little details in which most people push past ...

This is creepy. Really creepy, but I like it! Now, as the poem goes, its good to take on subject matters in which are not in our general stylizations. That ...

Your description work is glorious. It really is. You spend so much time and patience on those little details that we get the full scope of exactly what you want ...

Okay, so this is the first poem I have read of yours so I'm going to go into my basic breakdowns and try to explain my thoughts out as clearly ...

You have succeeded, Rosey. And what did you succeed in? Well, I'll tell you. I read this without thinking about the critique at the end. I read this without really ...

Brilliance. This was sheer godly awesomeness wrapped up into one horrifyingly morbid, intensely awesome chapter of... well, awesome proportions. I feel that this is what you were just itching to ...

My problem with the characterization with this chapters lies in the grave-digger, I'm starting to think. Now, as I read through the parts with Lenore, or the anger with her ...

First thing I noticed? The half of this was far better than the first half. In fact, it paled in comparison. You were enthralled with that certain scene, I am ...

Interesting. Very, very interesting. Now, I like the fact that you're tying in a rather cryptic name such as Frankenstein into this. It gives the story in itself a darker ...