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DreamWriter99

  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Love is Like the Rain!

    I can relate to this pretty well. My relationship with my boyfriend has never been great. But after a while, you learn to enjoy it. Similies is something I always ...

    May 16, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Maroon

    I really like this since I'm a nature freak and leave near the ocean. And I also get a mystery feeling to it, I hope that was what you were ...

    May 15, 2010
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Us Pirates We're Hardcore ( a Tik Tok by Ke$ha parody)

    I'd LOVE if they really made a parody of this. I will totally listen to it all the time! :elephant: Do you mind if I show my friends? I'll give ...

    Apr 14, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: A Love Letter.

    Aw, how touching! :) I do see plenty of grammar mistakes but, I even make those a lot. I think most of the others showed you your mistakes also. I, ...

    Apr 14, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: I'll always be here!

    Aw, how cute. :) You could use some help with grammer, nouns, and spelling. But other than that it's really good. I can see the moral and I can relate ...

    Apr 7, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Friendship will die

    Good job. But try to make things together and not just so...'random.' I think that's how you could say it. Try to make the lines stay with the subject. And ...

    Mar 28, 2010


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