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DreamWriter99

  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Love is Like the Rain!

    I can relate to this pretty well. My relationship with my boyfriend has never been great. But after a while, you learn to enjoy it. Similies is something I always ...

    May 16, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Maroon

    I really like this since I'm a nature freak and leave near the ocean. And I also get a mystery feeling to it, I hope that was what you were ...

    May 15, 2010
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Us Pirates We're Hardcore ( a Tik Tok by Ke$ha parody)

    I'd LOVE if they really made a parody of this. I will totally listen to it all the time! :elephant: Do you mind if I show my friends? I'll give ...

    Apr 14, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: A Love Letter.

    Aw, how touching! :) I do see plenty of grammar mistakes but, I even make those a lot. I think most of the others showed you your mistakes also. I, ...

    Apr 14, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: I'll always be here!

    Aw, how cute. :) You could use some help with grammer, nouns, and spelling. But other than that it's really good. I can see the moral and I can relate ...

    Apr 7, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Friendship will die

    Good job. But try to make things together and not just so...'random.' I think that's how you could say it. Try to make the lines stay with the subject. And ...

    Mar 28, 2010


Grief, I’ve learned, is really just love. It’s all the love you want to give, but cannot. All that unspent love gathers up in the corners of your eyes, the lump in your throat, and in that hollow part of your chest. Grief is just love with no place to go.
— Jamie Anderson