DreamWork

Uh,thank you for reviewing^^.I hate when I mistyping it all

I know bout that,just trying to make it short

Thanks for review . Ah I was careless when editing this poem! I appreciate your view on my poem :D

Thanks my dear^^ I appreciate your view!

Thanks for helping me point up my mistakes ^^ .Really appreciate it! :D

Thanks you, and welcome to YWS ;)

Thanks for review* bow*.I will work hard on grammar,can you please show me which one is it?Just to help me pointing up my mistake :)

I like the diction,but I need to agree with N'owl here.You doing a great job!Just keep the rhythm up here^^

Yeah,he/she don't even understand mine too o.O

Yeah,he/she don't even understand mine too o.O

Well,try look at diamante poetry first,to get know about the pattern etc :D

My dear, diamante poetry indeed, doesn't have rhythm^^

Thanks for review! I'm learning how to make a diamante poem,but it was so awful XD.I appreciated much^^

My pleasure^^ welcome to YWS :D

My pleasure^^ welcome to YWS :D