DreamWork

Hi PumpkinCat,Dark here with review :D I see the theme you want to point up here.But I think it need some more connection between them.Just let me review in each ...

Hi Shadow,Dark with review here. The story begins with the character of Shadow back again. But it feels too long with the first verse here! You can divide it into ...

Hi dragonfphoenix,I continued to read the next chapter here.I really wanted to know the next things will happen to them. #“Can’t sleep either, huh?” he* asked, looking at the mess ...

Hi dragonfphoenix,Dark again to give review here ;) I can feel that this story is getting interesting with the conflict exists when Seth disappears. So Shadow certainly play an important ...

Hi Dragon,Dark here to review your novel-story for chapter 10. I'm trying the best to review your story based on my knowledge in writing a novel. So I thought I ...

Hi Shadow',Dark here with review! Your story is certainly interesting and full of scenes that propel the reader feelings. Characters in your story truly living like a real drama and ...

Hi AyumiGosu17,have a good day.Dark here to give review on your story! I like your story when you use the character of 'I' as the main character can explain to ...

Hi ShadowVyper,Dark here to give review on your is a very breathtaking!The story that sorts of Hollywood movie script!I need to admit this. I guess I need to read it ...

Hi sarahnsnow,Dark here to give review on your story. I have no problem with your story, because it is your own writing styles and I absolutely like the originality of ...

Hi Cailey,have a good day!Here is Dark to give review on your poem. Your poem explaining about 'feeling exhausted' that you are experiencing with a distinctive reasons. Diction used is ...

Hi Karzkin,have a great day!Here is Dark to give review on your poem. Your poem is quite compact with simile and metaphor capable to give emotional impact to the reader ...

Hi Lateritic,what a nice poem here!So Dark comes to give review on your poem! ;) Good poem indeed provide a useful lesson to the community. Just like the poem that ...

Hi Jadefox!Have a great day in this review day.Here is Dark to give review on your poem. Where I am From-->The title caught my eyes.And I really wanted to get ...

Hello smanske15,Dark here to give review on your story! I liked the story line is organized and you certainly have a good story plot.Your writing style should be improved only ...

Hi Joe,I would like to review on this wonderful poem.I think you go through with a short time with this poem. # You taught me how to fly.-->It is maybe ...