DreamWork

Hi ANADIR,Dark with review! Quite an interesting poem here. Along with narrative elements that help the reader understand the 'plot' of this poem. Your poem is actually like a Epic ...

Hello illitar,Dark here with review ;) First of all,this novel tells the story of the royal children and also an adventure as war plans this chapter, you write a conversation ...

Hi strom'!Dark here with review. I totally like this story.You make it special with making the plot a bit twist.I like to be twisted,of course.This is the part that is ...

Hi there,Dark with review here. Lets start from the first of your story for this part 4. #It was the day of the kidnapping. Dan had to wait in the ...

Hi SereneSimpliciT,Dark here to give review! The story looks quite good with the unpretentious style of writing but is able to attract the attention of the reader.The story also full ...

Hi alilovessandy,Dark with review here! I love your poem here,kinda mysterious and full of un- expectation 'drama' between you and him.Just let me review in each lines to make sure ...

Hi UnorthodoxDreamer,have a good day,so here is Dark to give review on your story. A Little Demon at Camp part 1-->The title caught my eyes here. I see your story ...

Hi SereneSimpliciT,Dark here with review! WARNING: This is VERY LONG! -->Indeed! :D "Isugoro, get out of there, now!" Cent screams, his voice on edge, relaying how freaked out he is. ...

Hi Pompadour,Dark here with review! I totally love this poem so much.Especially the rhythm and literature styles you use here! #The shadows spoke of earnestness, And memories bare and old.-->Descripti

Hi SereneSimpliciT,Dark here with review! The characters and your story is so interesting here. I love the unique name you give to the characters. I think it's japanese name. I ...

Hi TheMessenger,Dark here with review! I love the story line that is well structured.Especially the details and messages you would like to convey. Tina walked out of the cabin. She ...

Hi willo,Dark here again to review. Remember I told that you have a good story here?Well,I hope so.Nothing much to say about the plot,because it was so good so far.I ...

Hi willow',Dark with review.First of all,happy review day! :) I love how the story going through here.Just a bit comment on grammar here . #"Nice to meet you." He shook ...

Hi WillowCutz,Dark here with review! I am impressed with your writing style that is interesting here. The storyline is also based on the plot that has been planned from the ...

Hi again PumpkinCat,Dark here with review. I like how you describe the Paradise with your own words and is quiet a great messages here. # My paradise does not lie ...