Dragongirl

Thank you much. On a side note, way to rock the leadboards!

Kevin, thanks! Glad you like it! I will defiantly give you a hollar when the next chapter is up!

I hear you about the terms, and I haven't read your other chapters so you may have already been doing the stuff I suggested. :) You are very talented, so ...

Waltzing, thank you so much for taking the time to review this. I have such trouble seeing my grammar and typos. It's like my brain has an auto correct setting ...

My pleasure!

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I meant that spelling and grammar were not something I am strong at, meaning I am not very good at them. :) I don't know why I am now great ...

Hello Ganga, To start off I want to say this was enjoyable and easy to read. You writing is crisp without too many unnecessary frills. So in the first paragraph ...

Wow, powerful words! This poem was beautiful, lace with heartache and hope, just like life is. I love this line; "I dream of brainstorms, full of imagination to explore." The ...

Haha, cool.

Hey wisegirl22! Glad you are enjoying the chapters. Thanks for the heads up on principal, I totally missed that it was spelled wrong. As for bullying one of your own ...

Thanks so much for the kind review. I am very glad you enjoyed chapter 2. You made my day!!!

Oh, I am sorry, it was probably just me. I really don't read much prose, (as I guess was obvious.) so I suppose I don't always know what to look ...

Ergosh, This is pretty good. You use some nice description and leave your readers curious about Gamour's history and wondering what is going to happen next. I do have one ...

Write it!!! You have skills! I think this sounds like a interesting story and I think that your MC has a good voice. Meaning I don't think he sounds fake ...