Dragonette

All I really have to say is that this is really good! I wish I had your tallent, girl! Everything about this particular part is just really pretty good, it's ...

This is really good Steph! I mean, uh, Servant4Christ XD. Anyways I've always liked (and envied) your writing, and this is no exception. :D The one thing I would have ...

Hey there, I'm Dragonette, or Dragon, or just Onet :) I hope you don't mind that I review your story today. Here's a couple nitpics I found as I read ...

just really kinda epic. I love it! And the name of the book is awesome, I love that even more. I don't know why, but something about 'Chapter One' just ...

No, Percy will be one of the seven. He has to be because he's the "leader" of the greek demi-gods, just like Jason is the leader of the Roman ones. ...

This is great. I especially like it's randomness (I'm a huge random fan). My favorite rhyme is the first paragraph/stanza/thing (sorry, can't remeber what it's called, I don't do poems). ...

You have some great descriptive words in there, hope you don't mind if I use a couple of those phrases; I especially liked the "chopped into frantic layers" it gave ...