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Re: The Robyn Academy ~ Prologue [new~final]
Well, this is the first time I submit a story. A prologue. It is not that long, though, but does it really matter? I'm also not very good with prologues, ...
Mar 10, 2010 -
Re: Chapter 1: Keylee (part 1)
To me this piece was most amazing. You are a wonderful writer and you have great description. I am amazed at all the details that you add; so much unique, ...
Feb 16, 2010 -
Re: Amarants
So, your new here. Welcome! I'm a newbie as well. You are going to love it here. Any way, you have a great story going on here, it leaves me ...
Feb 13, 2010 -
Re: Worst Book You've Ever Read
The worst book I ever read is The Fire Within in the Dragon Series by Chris D'Lacey. It was horrible. You know the saying "don't judge a book by its ...
Feb 13, 2010 -
Re: The Best Book Ever Read
I'd have to say that the best book I've ever read is Gracling I highly suggest this book to every one that is 15+ Another favorite read is the Dragon ...
Feb 13, 2010 -
Re: The Anarchy Part 2
I love it. I like how you finished the story and your description of the characters. I saw a couple spelling mistakes, but I don't have time to point them ...
Feb 8, 2010 -
Re: Spirit Sword- chapter 1
This is a very creative story so far, I like it. All though I'm not to fond of the mother-mine and father-mine business, it seems like too long of a ...
Feb 6, 2010 -
Re: Escape from the Academy, Part 2
this is great, I'm not very talented on grammar and such, so i can't help you there. but i really like this. Jet is totally dreamy, although he's a little ...
Feb 2, 2010 -
Re: Ending of Fire on Water
(this a review of the whole book, not this chapter) Hi, I've read your whole book and I think it is wonderful!!! You are such a great writer! You could ...
Jan 26, 2010
