Dragonet

At first I was disappointed; I mean it wasn't as funny, and it was in second person, and it didn't feel like the main characters had a real life, so ...

I loved it, as usual. But this time I had a couple nitpics. (My additions in purple) I didn't say anything, but Caitlin didn't seem to expect me too to ...

I love your stories! I secretly followed your last book, the Fire on Water, last year before I joined. And once again you've impresses me. I love your style, description, ...

Please forgive me for saying this, but I think it sucked, as I do the other books. Just some reasons: 1. The characters are way to powerful. They're all mary-sue ...

Yes! First comment! Woohoo! *coughs* um, sorry. We have this thing here on YWS where we all compete against being the first. Anyways, so, I see you're new here, hi! ...

This is amazing, Apple, I didn't know you were such a talented writer! I loved it! Your discription was really good. And it kept me curious, which is good. Gosh, ...

Positively wonderful, as usual. But I do have something that I want to point out. Her feelings about Keenan (love the name btw) are way to mixed. I mean one ...

Where did I stop you ask? I didn't stop at all, I read all of it, and that my dear is amazing. Considering that I didn't even plan to read ...

Oh my word I love this! And it is NOT really long at all! The people on this website have an obsession with short chapters. But, really it just looks ...

Hey, greenW, I read your story (obviously, or I wouldn't be writing this) and I thought it was really good. Your plot is really good and well-ly (I don't think ...

Well, I like this. But I think you need to describe your character a little more. It took me a while to figure out if it was a boy or ...

Ok, so I finally reviewed your story. This story is pretty good so I don't have very many nitpicks. I had done a lot of thinking lately ( four hours ...

Hi purple, you have a great story here! I love dragons, so I can definitely relate to this. I'm not so great on grammar so I can't help you there, ...

Oh my gosh this is cool! I didn't know you had it in you, Steph, to write something this...this evil and gruesome. Why didn't you tell me you had written ...

I only had time to do the first half of this. I'll try to do the other parts later. But when I asked that I wanted to know what it ...