DragonGirl11

Hey Vyper! You requested a review quite a while ago. Sorry it took so long to get back to you. Anyway, love the piece! When I started reading, I thoughht ...

Hello Dude! It's me again, your faithful (albeit late) Dragongirl11. I am still thouroughly enjoying this story. I'm hungry for more! I guess I have to go read the prologue ...

Hello, Dude! Here I am, as requested, if plenty late. Sorry about that. First of all, let me say that I really like this story, and I look forward to ...

Hey, AJ! Thanks for the review on my poem. I'll try my best to give you a helpful review. First of all, I like the feel of this piece. I ...

Hey there Dreamingthelife! Here I am, as requested - although it seems like DudeMcGuy has done my work for me XD For spelling and grammar, I would have mentioned most ...

Ok AJ here's my bit: I like the direction you're taking with this, social commentary, excellent! I especially liked the line, "Politicians? Too focused on coffee." Now, I don't know ...

Me again! This is just a continuation of the previous review, since it’s a continuation of the same story. The three men had reached the tavern when the sun had ...

Hey callmeike! DragonGirl11 here with the requested review. Better late than never, right? Anyway, this was a great story. I’m hooked! You could, however, use some more description of places, ...

I don't think WOW!!! is a strong enough sentiment. The poem has amazing imagery, and a certain air of mystery about it that sparks the imagination. (I didn't read the ...

Not bad, not bad at all! I didn't suspect Susan at all. More background on her would be really great, as would a description of her physically. Lester never came ...

Hey Disenchanted! What you've got here is a great beginning for a story. I would love to read the rest. Now, some line-by-liners: -" Weeooo!Weeooo! " I'm not entirely sure ...

Hey Redstar! First of all, I have to say, I don't really know what Left Behind is. However, I am a Christian, and NCIS is my favourite TV show ever. ...

That was incredibly beautiful! Like, wow! (It doesn't help that the guy I like fits oh-so-nicely into that fella's description of course ;) ) The only thing is, it shifted ...

Hey 567ajt, I see here a very strong poem so full of feeling it litterally made my heart ache. The only thing I should mention is that I don't understand ...

I really liked reading this story. I loved how it ended happily, but not your usual ditch-the-arranged-marriage-and-marry-the-true-love thing. I caught on within the first sentence that you were using