Dragon99

I think it could've been a much better story if it didn't end with the revelation that Mr.Harrow wanted to end his life, because when you hear a story like ...

Hey, glad I stumbled upon this. I liked where this story is going and since I couldn't find anything wrong with grammar that hadn't already been pointed out, I'm just ...

Very interesting, though I do have to ask, you should put a tittle up. A big catchy tittle is one of the things you should do first, even if your ...

hello Pompadour! I'll like to start off by saying your a darn good poet. The messenger has already pointed some things and I'll point out a few more. This poem ...