Dracula

No time to review, sorry! But I still think this should be a comic strip. It'd be brilliant. XD

Notes to self: It works that men can see the beautiful sirens, boys who haven't hit puberty see them as nightmarish creatures, females can't see them at all. I think ...

Awesome! Thanks for the help!

@maisewriting Hopefully you don't mind me bothering you, but I've changed the ending. Do you think it's an improvement?

Thank you! That was very helpful.

Thank you so much!! I'll fix those couple things you pointed out and see if I can brainstorm some other endings.

Thank you very much! I'll fix those things.

Thank you for that review! What do you think of my new ending?

Thank you for that review! What do you think of my new ending?

"i'm so confused. is this a realistic story or like a fairy tale one? cause you just had someone getting shot and people screaming and now there's a flying bus ...

I just woke up and can't read this right now but THANK YOU and I will go over it some time today and change what I think will work. :D

But yeah, that sentence you wrote above would be perfect.

It just doesn't seem like a normal thing, but your chars didn't seem to act like anything was out of the ordinary. If it's an important detail that will be ...

Perfect!!!

One time thing, yeah. Thanks sooooooooo much for that long review! When I get a moment I'll go through and edit things. Sorry about those semicolons. :P I do go ...